Here is my old one that I posted originally here, https://imgur.com/a/ArPtZ6C
And here is my new one!! For those asking about one year of no work since graduation, I’ve been struggling to get a graphic design position. I was laid off on April 2020 from a restaurant I worked for throughout my whole college years. Up until now, i only got an internship but its only temporary as you can tell from my resume lol. Will it look bad to recruiters/hiring managers since I haven’t been able to get a graphic design position? On top of that, alot of my applications got cancelled because of COVID-19 since most companies are not looking for people anymore…Anyhow, does my new resume look better? Are my sentences and grammar good too? What can I improve on?