I needed to practice, I was thinking about golf and how much I did not like it.

I was getting ready to post this anti golf attack ad when I realized that it did not need to be in a square aspect ratio, it was wasting space and making everything feel floaty (also I noticed small attention to detail errors, such as the sky that’s still visible, and the color blue as the background), but I want others’ opinions. Was the first attempt better?

Please also give me criticism on the final product.