How can I improve this graphic? Don't laugh at me.

I am making a logo for someone's meditation course and these are the skeleton (left) and a mockup (right) of the design she asked for. It is the throat chakra with a teardrop in the middle. If you're not familiar, the throat chakra is an actual, concrete design so I can't change the skeleton TOO much. I was trying to keep it simple and symmetrical, but it ended up looking noob-ish and mathematical…like zero personality. I'm also starting to dislike the white center as it's hard to see. In addition, I'm wondering if there are too many "petals." What can I do to zap some life into this thing?

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